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Cake day: June 30th, 2023

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  • The writing style is a little rough, and I’m not sure if my imagination is having trouble grasping how things are described or if they’re just described so vaguely that it’s giving me trouble picturing certain things (trying not to spoil anything if anyone who’s reading it comes across this)

    I love the premise of the story though, and most chapters are amazing. Character building is done well. But you ever come across a few paragraphs that you need to reread because you realized you didn’t understand it fully? Some whole chapters are like that for me lol