• Knock_Knock_Lemmy_In@lemmy.world
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      4 months ago

      Washington cats [missing] florida rats chase, annoy Vegas whores.

      There needs to be a which, that, who or something in that missing space for a proper sentence structure.

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        Here’s some discussion of omitting “that” after a noun. I don’t agree with Grammar Girl on what sounds awkward but she acknowledges that sentences can sound awkward but not be “wrong”.

        The Packers haven’t drafted a quarterback despite rumors they were interested in doing so.

        Again, these sentences aren’t wrong, but they would sound a lot better with “that” inserted after the nouns “allegations” and “rumors.”

        https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/articles/when-to-delete-that/

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          4 months ago

          Quaterback Love [that] Greenbay Packers drafted, played Detroit Lions.

          Some sentences can drop the relative pronouns and still make sense. This isn’t one of them.

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                That’s only because in the original sentence it’s talking about things generally (eg “strawberries are red”), so it needs a plural or a mass noun, which is the case in the original sentence. You could say “Quarterbacks Packers draft” instead. Or think of a team name that can’t use “the”, like “goalies West Ham United signed”.

                The point of the buffalo sentence is that it’s technically grammatically correct, even if it sounds awkward. It’s a really famous sentence among linguists, so do you really think all the language nerds who’ve seen it have missed that it’s actually not grammatical and needs a relative pronoun?

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                  Quaterback Twins Greenbay Packers draft, play Detroit Lions.

                  Nope. Still missing a word.

                  If the sentence was technically grammatically correct then a direct substitution of all 8 words (without adding more) should make sense.

                  I’ve already provided a counter example where it doesn’t make sense. I’ll drop my argument if you can find one that does.

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                    Quaterback Twins Greenbay Packers draft, play Detroit Lions.

                    This sounds fine to me (although I wouldn’t use the comma), I dunno what to tell you. Maybe it’s different in your idiolect, but again, do you really think you’re picking up on something that countless other linguists missed?